原题是: 假定你是张晓华，夏天来临，你给来安徽学习的美国朋 友Richard送去一些清凉油，可他不在，你给他留个便条。 要点如下：1.夏季中国家庭常用药品。 2.用于蚊虫叮咬、暈车、天气炎热引起的头痛等。 3.外用，请勿口服和误入眼内。 4.放在儿童不能触及的地方。注意:1.词数80—100; 2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 3. 便条的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：清凉油cooling ointment 蚊虫叮咬mosquito bites and insect stings Dear Richard, I am here to give you some cooling ointment,... Yours ， Zhang Xiaohua 这个作文题目对于我们大多数初中毕业生来说都很棘手难写的，当年中考分析出来后发现，这一题是所有题型中考生得分率最低的。
首先我们要通读这篇作文的题目要求，审清题意，就会发现这是篇科普说明文体裁的习作，写作中要求体现的要点有:家庭常备药、治蚊虫叮咬及晕车、注意事项。我们主要使用一般现在时选句。其次我们来列写作提纲，这个提纲很容易归纲出来:1、清凉油的性质。2、清凉油的主要用途。3、注意事项。 然后我们就可以起草了。让我们来分段造句吧，还记得我说的原则吗？对，避生就熟。
晕车和中暑对于初中毕业生都是陌生的表达，那我们可以绕着写。 第一段我们可以写两句: Cooling ointment is a kind of useful Chinese medicine. Most of the families often use it in summer. 第二段我们写三句: If you are unlucky to have mosquito bites and insects stings, just spread a little on the skin where it hurts. You can also use it when you have a headache caused by the hot weather.If you feel ill while you’re taking a long bus ride,it can also help a lot.第三段我们也写三句: It is not for eating. Be careful not to let it go into your eyes when using it. Make sure to keep it out of the reach of children. 现在我们可以在中间穿插一些过渡性的词语:（划线部分即为我穿插的过渡性词语。
） Dear Richard, I am here to give you some cooling ointment.Cooling ointment is a kind of useful Chinese medicine. Most of the families often use it in summer.l think it’s good for you.If you are unlucky to have mosquito bites and insects stings, just spread a little on the skin where it hurts. You can also use it when you have a headache caused by the hot weather.If you feel ill while you’re taking a long bus ride,it can also help a lot. Please remember:It is not for eating. Be careful not to let it go into your eyes when using it. Make sure to keep it out of the reach of children. Have a wonderful time in Anhui. Yours ，Zhang Xiaohua 我们再在草稿上去寻找单词拼写、动词时态、主谓是否一致等语法错误并作出针对性的修改，一篇有详略、有过渡、层次分明的作文就这样像造句练习一样写好了。
